I beat bitches up
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Voted For: iRise
Aint no way that your drillin me, so protect yah neck from my flying guillotines
You killin me? sangre retarded but still ain't got no diss-abilities
1ST LINE WAS A REALLY WAK FILLER BUT THE 2ND HAD GOOD WORDPLAY
I'm billin this nigga, with scripts that'll be sure to leave you disabled
Hell..sangre spits nothing but scrambled lines like pirate cable
WAK LINE. i GOT THE PUNCH BUT IT WAS STILL WAK
Shit, you rolling with rockers, and in class get pushed in lockers
While i'de have sangre's carrear drop online faster then nervous rope walkers
OK BAR i GUESS. NOTHING SPECIAL
ur verse was str8. u put in a punch here and there but u killed urself wit the filler lines. try making each line mean something good specialy in a battle wit only 6 lines
iRise..Hmm sum up in 1 bar that weak shit he'll bring
multi, Wack punch, bolded and squiggily lines in between
WAK
Its seen, Sangre's great you carnt back this..
Yeah Urise....
.... straight into the league of wackness
WAK
I like to give credit, You aint a rapper or a clone
Your styles a unique mix...
.... Of everybodys else but your own
WAK
ur verse was just wak man. elevate dawg. thats all I care to say.
V/irise - please return the favor wit an honest vote on one of my battles.
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Originally Posted by Jesus Christ
Damn son.......did I write that shit?
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