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Old 07-07-06, 03:00 AM   #5
M&rk
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dig the chorus, sound like a lil kid... verse, quality soundin lil worse, if u got cool edit check out the tutorials for spittin wit a bad mic... like the second verse's multies.. u should keep the higher pitch the whole chorus.... u got good emotion, i think wit better quility it'd be diller...
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lyrics nothin really special.. quility lacking.. but the chorus is pretty catchy and that wit an ansane beat go'n be a decent drop non the less.
i'd say 7/10...
should switch up the flow a lil more. but word keep up... return the feed, pzz
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