i dig the beat... thats always in movies havin anything to do with middle east.. catchy like ya chorus... how many tracks do u use on your chorus?? lyrics aint as creative as i thought, but like how the last set of chorus's come in... shit be dope,,, lyrics more topical, put a vision in ya head like that dancin round a fire and jazz... i dig how the chorus kinda comes out of no where just come ova ya lyrics// kinda need to either repeats some of ya lyrics durin ya verse or put more adlibs in at times so it doesn't get boring... but word good drop... returnt he favor on my song "cats pajamas" pzz

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