pretty decent

merc:
you had a lot of wordplay shit...unfortunately, most of it didnt really hit Out...insead it was actually pretty braggadocious, and although thats cool, dissing would be a little nicer. your first 4 lines were so-so, but not really clever...just truthful. my favorites were the limbs up (too bad u recycled), wrap it u quick, and the closer. other than that, i couldnt find much quotable here...it looks like u either underestimated ur opponent or had a bad day. all i know is, you had some cool lines in general, but they werent good for a battle (i.e., lawyers, horses feel at home). ok showing

out:
there wasnt much great stuff, but i guess u werent going all out either. seed/dirt lines are kinda played, and the lip gloss line wasnt really much. also, you rhymed battle twice...i know u admitted that, but thats still a no no. u had an original bitch move line, but ive seen other types of that line which were flipped much better. i liked the opener, closer, and wrap ya face in plastic lines. the rest was ehh...decent tho.

VOTE=OUT WRITECHAS on consistency with dissing and more clever shit