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Old 07-08-06, 12:07 AM   #9
M&rk
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So you think you can rap,LBL aint gonna help get you the fame
but my punches will leave you in the last 2 letters of your name
You must have shit on your mind constantly kid....whenever you think
Because everything i've seen you write i've Red Bull like energy drinks
DS? Your losin .. nigga You'll soon See For Yourself
N' i Don't Need fast net Connections, to Hand DS-L's
When it comes to your text against mine you jus cant hack it
Cuz people always take your words for granite
………………..Like you wrote your verses on a stone tablet
Try to get recognize but homie you aint even half that
but at lease you improve from not being notice to getting laughed at
vs.
nothing
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jus cuz i quoted the whole verse doesn't make it dope, but u had decent wordplay and shit in each line, some of it was played though, but all of it was at least decent, nice drop in my eyes... other cat sucked nuts
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