ur verse started out slow man. but u really picked it up nicely wit that steping on his chest line. that was really ur best line. ur flow was good but some of ur lines were really shaky at times. ur openner was bad and so was ur closer. try and make those to lines ur most important onece cuz thats wat we see first and last dawg. vote on my battle wit real talk dawg. keep elevating man

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