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Old 07-09-06, 09:28 AM   #3
Shear Kaughn
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the beat is real nice...on some war type shit..going into battle type shit

i first hear the hook...........its cool...
you come in alright....flow is a bit shacky...need to tighten it up a tad bit
overall this is a cool track..just need to tighten up on the flow, lyrics are fine...
also try upping the quality a bit as well....
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