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Old 07-09-06, 01:43 PM   #8
Jay Rose
I don't lose
 
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ight tito...you already know, great lyrics, great flow...funny concept....but something in the first verse just to me makes you sound seperated, like your sayin it but your not feeling it, it takes away from it a lil....then the second verse you dubs are too loud, well at least it appears that way from my speakers...butttttttt none the less, the song was put together very nice, i like your pronunciation of your words...and you keep doing it better n better not much left to improve on, but still a lil....keep it up bro
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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