Listenin'...Beat is crazy...yeah quality aint gr8 fam and the hook is energized which is good..all I heard was "ready for war", pronouciation is lacking well ure australian right so word..
energy is tight..you have that locked on this track, thats hot..delivery is hot..presence is also good..I just can't understand everything that yo'ure saying...pronounciation problems I think...
Breath control fam it's runnin' out..you need to write yo shit so it wont nah mean....
What you did well:
Flow
Delivery
Energy
Emotion
Multis (popsicle bit hot shit)
Presence
Didn't:
Breath Control
Pronounciation
Mixing
7.8/10
can you rtf:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231386