Your style is fine...

Its just in its infancy. Rapping isnt about changing your style to sound like everyone else who is already established as good. Its about developing your own personal style and making it sound dope.

All you need to do is keep rapping.. Keep listening to rap and reading rap, take in the vocab and rhyme schemes and all that shit by ear and incorporate them to your own shit. Its practice that makes people better. So keep doing your thing.

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