OMG u are the second person to use a beat b4 i use it..wtf!

well yeah u flowed very very well..i liked ur lyrics..delivery was very much alright..u put in an okay emotion but just put a lil more and then it'd be iight!...and umm yeah i liked the line 'life is not a picnic'..that actually caught my attention...hook was yeah alright no toooooooo deep words on that but yeah completes the sense of ur track...umm whatelse?..nothing..

i'm liking this track but hating it for the beat

hit my sig if u havent thanx

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