beat's been used before

but, it's a good one

intros with no lead in make me want to turn a track off...come with some ad libs or something

Is this Mage 1st? WOW...deep voice like Apexx

vocal quality is sub par...work on mixing

ur flow is average here, and your delivery lacks



9th...I think this is you...u need to up ur rhyming...hard to follow ur flow without a definite rhyme scheme

decent with the basics...


ok track fellas


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