glad you fixed them links mayne....
intro.... funny as hell LMAO @ the HOw High clip....
verse... you kinda bit off madddddddd lines.... commercial lines and shit....
but.... you can elevate.... but you gotta work on the following.... control your emotion over the track.... you hype and thats good.... but it dont sound like you hype for the right reasons.... nahmean??? its like you juss reciting lyrics... next audios will be much better..... production wise and all that.... flow and all that... needs ironing out.... you got a lil swag... coo... but memorize your lines and shit.... and come more smooth next time around.....
hook was coo..... swagger jacked... but its aight....
for the first time around the block you aint do too bad home boi.... id say... 7.2/10
keep droppin to see that elevation