I like ur melody on the intro
the beat of course is hot its Ansane
your flow is good.....and ur lyrics are tight
the only thing that you'd need is a better mic and you'd be pretty damn dope and more enjoyable too listen too........the hook melody is good.....this aint too bad tho.....i'm feelin the joint
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can you return the favor -
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