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Old 07-12-06, 05:25 PM   #25
Tha .Q
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k...intro was cool...wudda been dope with some Dolemite on there


beat doesn't live up to the hype of the intro

Is this your verse coming in? Wow...it sounded like you were just talking...You need better mixing bro

The flow isn't bad...but, your vocals sounds like they're sitting on top of the beat instead of within it...

a lil fresh rhyming here and there

voice sounds good on track

at the 1:40 mark, your delivery sounded like you were out of breath

"effn hate" was aiight...but it didn't rhyme with anything...So, it was like out of place

This was a slick soundin track tho...

U have potential...keep droppin

RTF please on "DO NOT PUSH"


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