beat is better than how you flowed on it


I can tell you right now that you lack mic presence...

How big is your dick son?

Big dick = cockiness on track

^^my theory

Rap like you got the biggest dick in da world man, even on a "tender" track like this.

You're not coming off strong on track, IMO.

Flow was alright

Delivery was lacking...you need more breath control/inflections...Think Biggie Smalls...perhaps the best at it, IMO.

Ur lyrics were personal = good

You have potential man.


Keep at it.

RTF pls

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