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Old 07-13-06, 11:58 PM   #13
So.Rell
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I'll break u in half and put u at piece(s) wit earth, like If I prayed to buddha
ur whole style is still last and weak,(last week) so u can re-live that K.O. from shake zula

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Kid you a pussy… so you better grow some nuts dawg
My bars leave you incarcerated…
No protection? I garuntee You’ll be getting fucked Raw
If anyone got a taste for him I got Precise aim for these fiends
To kill competition I keep it like d-12… rely on m16’s
I got a lot to do this week kid… I kinda live a wild life
So thanks kemp…
for giving me the only kid to make J bee look nice

Well Raw you seem to have some wording problems stretchin you lines too...Try to sum it up get to the point, That's really all that was flawed and a few weak concepts. Ace pretty nice, had it's down point the opener could've been better the m16 line was DOPE...

Vote - Ace
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