ok...u took me back with this beat...flow is koo..you changed it up...delivery is laidback, sum words u coulda delivered better but nothign major on verse 1...hook...yea u kno its tight..verse 2....flow sounded like verse 1 halfway u speed it up...but its jus a more rapid version of same flow....emotion is better faster better...but pronounciation suffers a bit, verse 3 still rolling wit same flow...same flaws as other verses....biggest probs was flow needed a change up...emotion coulda been stronger...not saying get more hype but fluctuate ya words better an convey that flirtatious vibe u was going better...u sounded like u was jus strait rappin wasn't really getting at ladies way u shoulda....but all in all its a good track....jus needs touching up....1

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