lemme break it down for ya..since i gotta leave 2 links for the track i just posted...

delivery is nice for this....really kinda mellowed...but u can feel that u mean what u say...definitely.

u have some diff. points of views than i do in some aspects...but thats def. not anything to hold against u....i LOVE where u used the clips on the hooks....especially the last one...that shit takes your stomach away....plane just slices through the building..sickening to me.

overall man...the lyrical content was dope...flow was nice...this would make a nice lil mixtape track...props

please rtf... on cant touch me

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231660

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