beat is pretty coo...could be mixed better...i dunno if its your vocals doing that or what..but the beat quality doesnt seem very good

same goes for your vocal quality...it could be upped definitely.

i think the hook would sound good if the quality was nice...but thats always gonna take a lot away from a track

flow is pretty good....sounds like in a couple spots u have some problems breathing...so work on the control there...

other than that..its not bad...its hard to tell..but i think this would be a pretty good track if the quality was good.

please rtf...on cant touch me
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231660

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