i dont like the beat
singin is okay......you dont sound like you put enough emotion into your voice in the singing part
your verse comes in
its pretty good.....lyrics were meaningful
flow stays on point ...
I think u should up ur emotion a lil more and u'd be way better
this is pretty good.......just pick up a better mic
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can you return the favor
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