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Old 07-15-06, 08:00 AM   #12
Konvict_NYC
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Listenin', oh word yeah Im usin this beat but its gon be dedicated to the single mothers...

Anyways, intro is nice...youre flow is fine here throughout this whole track..never fell off once...

Delivery is perfect too..

The only flow I can find is the hook..I think it cuda done a lil better, but still catchy...

Lyrics are radio friendly and mainstream suitable...would make a good lil video too..

Sumin' for the ladies here, im definitely feelin thsi PT...emotion is working too...you had a melody during the song...which made it even more radio friendly..

Actually im growin' fonder to tha hook..so props..

Nothin but compliments..

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