Thread: Yvonne-Dear Dad
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Old 07-15-06, 08:03 AM   #13
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Ayo listenin' shorty...

Beat is nice...different...but nice...

Hook is pretty decent your singing isnt bad, if it was mixed better itd be better..

You can defintely feel what youre tryna say...emotion is good..

Lyrics definitely personal = meaningful like PT said....

yeah definitely the hook isnt bad...I actually like it jus need better quality...

Flow is good throughout the track...sumtimes fell off but mosta tha time stayed up...

nice track shorty, keep em coming yvonne, 1
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