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Listenin', like the intro sample..beat intro is nice im feelin the pianos and the gun shots are a nice effect..this beat is perfect for this track..

You come in now, flow is crazy fam...on this verse great flow and delivery..lyrics im readin too and its real tight im feelin the story your tellin so far about this race difference..

Hook is tight and catchy too nice lyrics on it too...

2nd verse feelin the lyrics again too, jeffrey dahmer line was crazy...this story is unique and interesting..

Life the pause and sample before the hook..

3rd verse...dayum...the story took a gruesome end bout the mother dying..damn...chilling ending to dat...

Adlibs were real good in this track helped it flow along with the emotion alot..

Ight lets rate shit:

Flow = 9.5/10 didnt fall off really
Emotion = 10/10 you cudnt change what you did there
Delivery = 10/10 same as before...
Lyrics = 10/10 great lyrics..specially on the hook (revised my decision here lol, read it again and damn no flaws)
Articulation = 8.8/10 I guess ima pick on this cos it isnt any use fo you to get feed without and constructive critique..and this was the only thing I cud say wasnt as good as the others, some words I cudnt hear but rlly i heard most...so its not a huge prolblem..but fo real this track is crazy...-downloads-....1