aiight word, so I just read along to lyrics and listned first and now am only typin' feed. But damn, yo. dope ass story fo reel. that ending was ill, some girl IMed me during the intro of 3rd verse so I missed what you was saying, so I rewinded track back so I could pick up from it. that's how into it i was yo. lol but fo reel, beat was dope. Your flow throughout was real nice, good change ups. Also the adlibs really added to story, made it more colorful. Hook was plain dopeness. basically whole story wrapped into that. dope shit. whole story was nice. good touch to make his mom be onme of people who died, makes you either feel sorry for dude, who like "he deserves that" depending on your opinion so far thru story. and nice ending too.

overall dope track yo. loved it stay up. 9.5/10

EZ