ok...intro was a nice lead...opened wit a good flow...delivery fits subject matter a beat...vocals is low tho...hook...hook is koo...u need to mix the"you always on my mind" diff...make it softer an have a wet, echoed sound, the roughness of it takes away from hook...but damn this beat is a BEAST!....you cant sing for shit but u trying like a mufucka..lmao...but it wasn't bad u jsu needed to layer it more..if u had layed it wit sum whispers an panned them an spit the main vocal on hook softer OHHHH MAN that hook woulda been infectious...but all in all this was good son..shawties gon like it kid..lyrics was nothign spectacular but this aint a track where that matters....good shit.

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