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Old 07-15-06, 01:22 PM   #5
Past Tense
On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
 
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aight i'm peepin this now

quality is perfect for the beat.....

flow was really smooth....... i really like the multies you use in your lyrics and the vocab you got really catches the listeners attention....I like this....

The hook is nice........i like the piano melody on the backround

Second verse is the same flow is a lil bit quicker and the lyrics and multies stay on point.......delivery and what not is still hot

the hook again is nice really smooth

The pause in the song was cool

came right back in hot.......

i like the third verse the most.......the gun effect was cool....fit it perfect and wasn't too loud or quiet

Good shit fam...i like this.... hot shit

keep ddroppin
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