dunno if i like the beat....but u worked it pretty decent...not bad..

singing really isnt bad IMO..i think it could sound better with a better mix...and could be a lil more catchy with a better mix as well.......of course its not perfect..this singing could be a lil more polished...but still...not bad...


lyrics are pretty coo...can tell its coming from a personal deal..to your dad and all.....delivery not bad..

i DO like the verses though....i wish this was done in a pro studio...i think i'd like it tons more...flow is coo..

i honestly like this track...good shit

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