o damn...i mistakingly deleted what i said

re-types


i'ma rescue the delay


i'm liking this beat..YES!..smooth n soft it is indeed...u need to up ur vocal volume cos it was tooooooooo low(i know it shud be but this was a lil too much or volume reduction)..ur flow is nice and steady..i like it...hook is sexy..yup...ur flow on verse 2 was nice but mayne u shudnt let us hear u catching ur breathe..do u smoke?...umm ur flow on verse 2 was iight but u like hopped off tempo @ some spots but nothing hilarious...sexy hook again...i am liking this guitar on the beat and yeah ur lyrics were cool too..fitted the whole atmosphere u know...errr nothingelse to say cos its only the beat now....aaaaand cut!


okay...nice track!decent!




hit my sig 'dear dad'


thanx

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