Voted For: Raw King

i liked ur humor on this...u had more harder punches..the metaz were much more decent..ur flow was better,first,cos u didnt space ur bars,and secondly cos ur syllab count was a lil more...idk what to call it but better...i'ld like to let u know that the uno line didnt rhyme that much but w/e the game over backed it up...structure was not that gd but way better fo sho!..and i have seen u drop way much more better things..but meh guess u rushed it...w/e..still decent


uno...dont space ur bars it puts ur flow off...ur punches didnt hit as hard as raw's...u needa hit the haiku cyphers alot for u to get a better flow/syllab count...and ummm...u dont really need to explain all ur lines mayne...screw that..u cud xplain like 2 lines if they dont get the rest of ur verse..tell em to eaither not vote or,like u stated,pm u for xplanations...ummm whatelse...work on ur punches a lil more..u had some idead but u didnt mount the punches up that well...i wish u luck on elevating tho...



u took this hands down raw...

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