You wrote this as if it was an audio or some shit.

if your going to do a text....make it flow better...structurize it to match ur flow.
don't just look up words in the dictionary and put them in ur pieces to make u look like you use big vocab because its noticeable when you do it.
not bad...have some good multies yet some are just forced and not needed.

this is written as if u were going to record it..not just let it dry in text u know what i mean?

keep at it..ive seen worse

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