Originally Posted by tornado220

rap is in first person the writer actually participating and has a attitude listen to this i'll change a little

appear to be shook and surprised as fear looked into my eyes
the velocity and thrill caused animosity to bulid even in skies
stride down streets collide with clown i defeat to turn the tides
haunt creeds and taunt breeds hurt feeling alert by revealing
the decadent plateau, with emancipated fears and squealing
my plan has devastated years of feelings and got cat kneeling

As fear is looked dear, straight in the eye
animosity builds with strides of carelessness that collides,---do not need an S,
taunting breeding, Hurtful feelings good-bye
Waived on a decadent plateau of emancipated tears and lies,<-Collide and lies not rhyme