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Old 07-18-06, 02:50 AM   #11
Pakaveli
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From: In Shadows
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This wasn't great there were amusing parts in it that kept my attention for a while but as an overall piece it lacks in imagery sicamore multies and basically is at a novie stage, try delving into more complex topics and somehitng that hasn't been done before or flip a topic and write it...W/e though, Stay up
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