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Old 07-18-06, 09:00 AM   #26
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Black Poet
 
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From: London
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Both come well nice, was feeling Tims verse, seemed more complex and
abstract,.. just a really good read. Both verses flowed really well nice use
of vocab and good grammer. Dope I would like to colab with both of you
if your down.

Two bars that I liked,.. were..

Battered dimension, trampled in digression
She searches ever more still she is a lost cause even in her reflection
^^^Dopeness^^^ really liked this...

Gloves made from quintessences of Satan
Drove wild boars in communities of Haitians
^^^this was just dope flow !!! liked it.

Stay up both ~
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