this wasnt anything special.

not knocking you dude. im sure if this was recorded like you said you planned to it woulda been fine. going to a beat and what not.

but as for written poetry the whole idea was rather corny, played and simple..you had no apparent metaphors no irony nor complex vocabulary...just basic rhyme and off flow verse.

elevate..no hate just trying to help.

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