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Originally Posted by tornado220
wow kid this is not even poetry this is effective writing all the way any professional person can write this (wow1 that's the reason we can't see eye to eye) it only rhymes at the end sometimes and kinda boring must learn to break the action with a comic relief
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theres multiples....the whole thing is practically a metaphor...if you don't know metaphors than don't leave comments...tell me the meaning of my metaphors and then critique and lastly let me clear things up, i have no probs with you neither should you with me. I prefer being cool with all instead of beefing. Accept your critque, good lookin' Stay up.