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Please excuse My Sickness
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IP:
Voted For: Clockwork
Breakdown
Clockwork
Dis dude say he Notorious but he new to the RV
I can get you well know for losin, make it your hobbie
that was weak and not worded well
My flow is sicker than animals at the vet
He sweatin now. So he put on some deodarant. He tryin to keep it a Secret
...Worded bad and strecthed and the punch was weak..
This is your first performance...you actually showed up
Your career like dead fireworks...you feel the light but you still wont blow up
....that was alright nothing specail../
Like police officers dis bitch has no clue
Im a felony, I go to jail just for murderin you
...weak....
overall I think your verse wasnt all that strong you basically need to work on how you word your punchez and how long your lines are and your syllable count can be a hendurance to how people look at your verse so next time man work on those things and you will be straight
Grillz
When he comes to rappin' we gun' see how this clock works.../
Tried throwing one punchline at me and this nigga got hurt...//
...weak...
Time gun' stand still, As soon as I drop this Clock.../
Get OFF the Fucken grind, You ain't gun' last on ma Block...//
a little weak..
Why the fuck you only battle newbs, You runnin' scared?.../
Is it cuz you ain't bringin' shit to this game, You unprepared...//
.. weak...
Gun' cause my temper to flare, its ma nature im Notorious.../
Over before it started, and You know I'm gun' be
Victorious...//
[/b] Weak..[/b]
Man no offense you had nice flow but you didnt throw not one punch that was noticable man i mean i see attempts but they was weak man its like you didnt even try .....you couldve had a thousand punches just off his name i mean I know a few man you need to work on throwin punchez and try to use some personals both of yall
my vote goes to Clockwork
battle wasnt all that great
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