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Old 07-18-06, 10:00 PM   #10
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Voted For: Wordz Ahgod

Luciana-Came pretty good had some good punches throughout your verse personals were appealing and effective...no problem with ur structure flowed on through which made ur punches noticeable.

favorite lines:

"ill hit u with abonable knee drops... until your fuckin wig pops
u beatin me in spittin? u trippin like joggin beaches in flip flops"

overall:6/10

Wordz ah-god:Came pretty hard aswell, i liked your wordplay and comical punches had me laughin and ur shit was appealing...structure wudnt bad had nice flow to bring out ur punches..personals was iight no complaints...

favorite lines:


"so understand ur place, u "the bottom" like south miami
but I'll expose u for wat u really are, even wit out pulling down ur panties
"

overall: 7/10

v/wordz ah-god

rtf if i get into a battle.

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