okay

i see that you guys have a solid grasp of imagery, your verses are constructed visually appealing, and you know how to excite the readers.

i think that your only problem here could have been that not much was said.

you call this a flex, but where are the relevent punches?

where are the "big up to me, i 'm nice" lines?

find those and repost.

i liked it, but so much more could be said.

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