Thread: iRise vs Sangre
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Old 07-19-06, 06:33 PM   #18
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Voted For: iRise

irise-your lines were a bit long but still effective pretty good use of the rhyme scheme good punches in the verse could use some harder punches but you got the job done none the less good flow...brought out ur punches good.

overall: 5.5/10

sangre:Your verse was structured weird but flowed okay.....you had some okay punches not enough to beat your opponent..never underestimate ur opponent then u come weaker then him.....i think you should stay fluent with punches through out and not die down.....keep elevatin....

overall: 4/10

v/irise

rtf on my battle verse rexless once he drops...peace.
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