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Old 07-20-06, 09:26 AM   #8
DaTrusHurtz
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washedup, damn has been, my flow kills neezy.
call this battle Eric Wrights son.. cuz beating you's jus a Lil Eazy.
you can call me weak.. i'll gohead and warn you dogs..
I had problems with push-up's..so ya girl started wearing normal bras
think you've been elevating Kaze? maybe, g.
i'll admit that he was gaining on dopeness.. until he stopped chasing me

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Kaze, just don't think your ready for this league. Your concepts, wording, and rhyme scheme all need some work. Maybe elevate somewhere else and come back when you've improvement. Ouch, verse didn't have much effort put into it, but it was still pretty good, I'm looking forward to reading more from you.

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