Yo...It's about time I came back!


Now
As I was reading the above posts, I peeped unbelievable statements
I gave y'all time to elevate ya skills. .
.....but I got tired of seeing you waste it!
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Rexless cyphers alot, but I thought before I returned, he'd up his flames
come to find out ....he's still the below average mc, nothings changed!
Now, Words Ah-God is gettin better, some of the shit he come with, raw
but I still can see the newbie inside you, so you're still not up to par!
I also see some newcomers in the cyph, thought that was excitin
turns out .....the word newcomers is a good word to describe them!
Jay, include strength in your punches, cause they're a little soft
and next time, keep it more realistic, and your rhyme scheme is off.
Mystic, with a tad more work, you'll be hard-hitting with ya scripts
cause the first 4 letters of ya name describes your above punches. .
they MYST!
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I see alotta potential in this thread, but all you need is more practice
and maybe someday, u'll have verses as nice as mines to come back with!

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The Scholar