Wow, nobody leaving any feedback. Don't take it personal, fuckers are lazy on this site. Anyway, I liked this piece. I am always more partial to real-life pieces rather than created pieces. To me, the real life ones pack more emotion in them. Overall, the piece is nice... its got a good flow to it and you don't try and forcefully pack it with overly complex words to make it seem better. I like the simplistic style that you have used and I think that doing so has given the emotion a bigger sense of realism, thus it comes across as being more powerful than it would if it was forced.

Decent read, if you have any more pieces then just send me some links and I'll be happy to leave some feedback for you.

- N.F.

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