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Old 07-21-06, 12:14 PM   #7
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
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From: East Coast
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Nobody on da site likes u, or thinks about u, it aint even funny,
So i finally decided to pay em some mind and got to keep all my money
THIS WAS GOOD BUT YOU SIS A MONEY BAR RIGHT BEFORE IT SO IT TOOK AWAY POWER FROM THIS ONE
you know your lyrics cant cut it kid why not just forfiet,
Hell i'd ghost u some lyrics myself, but i dont think u'd be good for it
THIS WAS ALSO MISSING, THERES NO REAL PUNCH IN IT EXCEPT SAYING YOU'LL GHOST HIS VERSE
Fuck this kid man he's taken an L from everyone on dis site like rover,
so why not just call him a text whore, since he's constantly gettin fucked over,
DECENT LINE HERE

MOST OF YOUR BARS HAD STATEMENTS INSTEAD OF PUNCHES AND THE ONES WITH PUNCHES WERENT WORDED AS EFFECTIVELY AS COULDVE BEEN

VS

Malicious is new to this site, he hates to be called a newb so leave him alone
There's hope after all,after his first loss, he'll be 46th RANKED, n' be clearly Known
DECENT BAR HERE NOT REALLY HITTING BUT THERE IS A PERSONAL IN IT AND ITS RELEVENT
Knock you to the floor with my punches, and make you eat em pound for pound
Im his rolemodel, but he truly looks up to me.... cuz he's so stuck to the ground
THIS IS EHHISH.
10 sorry lines is all I need to own you, if you say your good, then your bluffin
tears is pouring down ya face, your verse is shit, so why are u cryin over nothin
THIS IS EQUIVALENT TO MALICIOUS CLOSER IN TERMS OF POWER

REV HAD AN OK VERSE
BOTH YOU CATS AINT TEXT IN A BIT SO WITH THAT IN MIND
YOU'LL BOTH BE DROPPING BETTER ONCE THE RUST IS OFF
I FEEL LIKE IT WAS CLSE BUT IM LEANING TOWRDS REV FOR MORE
HITS IN HIS VERSE
V/ REV

RTF ON MY BATTLE ITS BEING SLEPT ON
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