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Old 07-22-06, 03:50 AM   #12
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sank tion won this cuz I could actually read his verse with some flow and rhyme scheme.. blazin had 4 lines, and the 2 middle ones rhymed only.. AND they were stretched as hell.

Balla gay so dont think the drugs when i say he ''Blows Crack''

^^Only line that was sorta a punchline..

both, work on punchlines.. blazin, work on rhyming and flow especially.. you need the basics.
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