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Old 07-22-06, 08:01 AM   #9
Appocolyptik
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40 Grams punch was decent but the concept was basic. You worded it quite well though. Wireless your wording let you down here. At first glance you make it sound like a "dick in my mouth" punch, but after re reading you find it's a pretty basic but ok eat newbs for breakfast punch.

V/ 40 Grams for having a better concept and executing it better.
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