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Old 07-22-06, 06:51 PM   #15
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I'll break down both verses just for the hell of it.


he shuld win this easily.he's skill'd & has text patent.
just like his spot for WWWB.
..............opps, but that^ didn't happen.
even if it was the truth, it was still not that good... I mean, saying "oops, that didn't happen" is like something a 10 year old would say.
good on audio & text? pls. nobody reads u hobo.
and ur flows' not radioactive.
....so stop think'n that chernobyl
the radioactive concept has been used a lot better... the wordplay was aight, but the diss wasn't that affective
plus this fattie should diet. we've all seen the pics bud.
and find it sad that even ur breast don't like to push up.
funny, i guess... but too simplistic
it's a naked fact that my bullets'll dive n ur ASS.
so you know they'll get 'sick wen they go to wet class.
not the best nameplay.. but it works
an infrareded blood bath. my hair triggers' never wait'n
so wen ur sideburns? all I can tell u is it's a hairy situation
i get the sideburns/hairy situation... but there is no point to the diss... its like all you've said is when his side burns, its gonna be a hairy situation.. that aint even funny
^ for that last bar, perhaps if you did something like...

an infrareded bloodbath. my hair triggers mark a level kill
an the bullets'll give ya side burns, 'coz we all know puberty never will


VS.

heres ya chance, take the win... ive already had plenty
cuz we all know me no showin is the only way u'd have any
this is gay... it was ILL in its early days but this concept has been used far too many times now
u need to start prayin, i aint playin dood..
ur the alias of Pharric! HAHAHAHA..
...(am i the only one sayin WHO..?)
another played concept, but flipped decent for this one
u've been a nobody, pullin bitch moves.. dont u feel trife?
not here to make friends..
..so whats ur excuse for havin none in real life?
this was funny, although the no friends card is getting old
what would i do in ur position? knowin u cant hack it..
either slit my wrist or i cant say.. ive never been a faggot
decent flip on an old concept
i didnt make time, but i wouldnt have had to try..
i woulda whaled on u.. but u aint a big enough fish to fry.
wordplay is basic, and the cheese-factor is WHOA


Overall, this wasn't that impressive of a battle. ClasSick clearly didn't try and you can see it in his verse. I mean, I know practically every concept is played nowadays, but some of the ones he used were PLAYED TO THE MAXIMUM. He did flip them decent though. Marcus, your verse was a mixture of let downs for me. You started with a childish comment, which turned out to be false which worsens the case. Your wording was real simplistic... I don't know if you meant that on purpose, but simplistic wording only works if you are throwing a REAL ZINGER at your opponent. The nameplay is probably played on ClasSick now... and it wasn't the best either. And that last bar just made no point, it wasn't dissing at all.

So, in the long run... ClasSick would've won this comfortably had it not been for you not granting the extension.
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