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Old 07-23-06, 04:11 AM   #17
Ca'lam
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aight wassup lil niggy.



first joint

the intro was ill. When she was singing at first shit was hot, but the hook.. she need some help on lol...

yea about the that *BOOM* when the beat come in lol.. that needed to be chilled out :P ..

lyrics was aight in my opinion. real simple like, thats coo. i like them type tracks. but rhyme schemes need to be payed more attention to when you spit a simple joint yah'mean ? jus real talk. Flow was gravy, ya dig. a few times you almost fell off but you was back at it like bunnies and shit yah'mean ?


second joint

i thought this was the best of the two. some aight punches/wordplay in there. Flow was on point. a it short, but i do the same shit so its aight :P.


overall a nice lil collage and shit. keep it pimpin
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