Wow the way you put so much complexity into your poetry amazes me.
Your metaphors are unbelievable..and your vocabulary....outstanding
i loved this piece....

"Yes! Drive that stake through
My broken skull and continue
To fuck me over again and again!
When you're done, lick the plate
Clean with a serpentine pass;
Drag that jagged tongue across
My empty head until all that's
Left is a delighted hiss!"


My favorite stanza ....had good emotion my god did u get what you needed to say out haha rtf on my piece please.

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