I actually really enjoyed this piece. Coming into it I thought you were Passive, so I don't even know who the hell you are at this point but whatever. Very poet Om, which, being a poet first and foremost I can always apreciate. The rhyme scheme in this was pretty generic and I was slightly dissapointed with that, but that fact that the piece was contectually fluent made up for that because really that's more important in my opinion anyways. Overall, consistant drop and I enjoyed it.